Friday, September 9, 2011

Essay#1 Rough Draft

 Ben La Scola
Professor Kerr
EN 101-23
September 09, 2011

Essay #1 First Draft

A laptop is a mobile personal computer, also called a notebook. There are different kinds of laptops such as, desktop replacement, midsize, thin-and-light, ultra-portable, and tablet PC (authority) . A laptop is a type of computer with many advantages and disadvantages, though the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. A laptop is used for the many things such as, gaming, writing, media, and many more. A laptop is a mobile version of a desktop.
There are different classes of laptops such as, desktop replacement, midsize, thin-and-light, ultra-portable, and tablet PC. Ultra-portable are the smallest and lightest laptops. Very portable but lower spec, smaller screens, smaller keyboards and less features, 4 pounds or less . Expensive. Best for people who travel a lot. Midsize is for basic everyday use, limited battery life, 6-8 pounds . Thin-and-light combination of midsize and ultra-portable. Weigh 4-6 pounds.
Desktop replacement biggest and heaviest laptops, best performance, closest to desktop or tower, 7.5 pounds and up (cnet). Tablet PC best mobility, best battery life, less performance.
A laptop is a type of computer with many advantages and disadvantages, though advantages outweigh disadvantages. Advantages: portability, productivity, connectivity, size, low power consumption, mostly quiet, battery. Disadvantages: Performance, upgrade-ability, durability, heat, security,
A laptop is a computer with different types within each class, such as gaming laptops, everyday use laptops, business laptops, and media center laptops (pcmag).
A laptop is a scaled down mobile version of a desktop/tower with multiple classes and uses. A laptop ranges from $100-$6000 and has uses for gaming, business, media, and everyday use.



1 comment:

  1. Ben this focus is not going to work. You are writing a compare contrast essay--you need to write a definition essay

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